Before I wrote this critique I downloaded the wallpaper pack and viewed the picture on my screen in 1920x1200. I advise everyone to view this picture as big as they can. I know your work now for quite some time now, and therefore I know this is something you don't do everyday. You're able to pull a nebula out of the cylinder very easily and that is your speciality. Your Planets are very good too. And now we come to the critique part. I'm not as satisfied with those ice asteroids as I'd like to be. They have a comic like feeling to them, which the rest of the picture hasn't. I would've liked a more crystal like feeling about those asteroids. More jagged, more edged. These look like they have been molten and then slowly frozen to the state in which they are now. I also would expect more light and transparency action with the environment. Apart from that... It's a solid JoeJesus piece. Just not the kickass thing I hoped for.
This is trully the first time I like your asteroid field, but I fukin love this one. The whole picture has got a lot of depth and it really gives me the icy feeling, with that blue/white combination. This one is just perfect as it is JOe, you made a big one with this. Addie
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In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
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I know your work now for quite some time now, and therefore I know this is something you don't do everyday.
You're able to pull a nebula out of the cylinder very easily and that is your speciality. Your Planets are very good too.
And now we come to the critique part. I'm not as satisfied with those ice asteroids as I'd like to be. They have a comic like feeling to them, which the rest of the picture hasn't. I would've liked a more crystal like feeling about those asteroids. More jagged, more edged. These look like they have been molten and then slowly frozen to the state in which they are now. I also would expect more light and transparency action with the environment.
Apart from that... It's a solid JoeJesus piece. Just not the kickass thing I hoped for.
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