Before I wrote this critique I downloaded the wallpaper pack and viewed the picture on my screen in 1920x1200. I advise everyone to view this picture as big as they can. I know your work now for quite some time now, and therefore I know this is something you don't do everyday. You're able to pull a nebula out of the cylinder very easily and that is your speciality. Your Planets are very good too. And now we come to the critique part. I'm not as satisfied with those ice asteroids as I'd like to be. They have a comic like feeling to them, which the rest of the picture hasn't. I would've liked a more crystal like feeling about those asteroids. More jagged, more edged. These look like they have been molten and then slowly frozen to the state in which they are now. I also would expect more light and transparency action with the environment. Apart from that... It's a solid JoeJesus piece. Just not the kickass thing I hoped for.
I know your work now for quite some time now, and therefore I know this is something you don't do everyday.
You're able to pull a nebula out of the cylinder very easily and that is your speciality. Your Planets are very good too.
And now we come to the critique part. I'm not as satisfied with those ice asteroids as I'd like to be. They have a comic like feeling to them, which the rest of the picture hasn't. I would've liked a more crystal like feeling about those asteroids. More jagged, more edged. These look like they have been molten and then slowly frozen to the state in which they are now. I also would expect more light and transparency action with the environment.
Apart from that... It's a solid JoeJesus piece. Just not the kickass thing I hoped for.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.